Rain opened wounds on the lake
and road puddles. Dawn Fine, the mid-wife
held the baby up to the lamp.
Everyone in the family saw
the aberration from their own angle:
the knife that was born with her,
buried in the side of her head.
This was far deep in
country, several hundred years
beyond the nearest city, where a
natural death was always more natural.
Villages on the edges of lakes…
Farms trailing off like ellipses…
hills in various stages of pregnancy.
The youngest daughter with the pale
skin and freckles in her hair, shy as grass
that folds over to one side when the wind blows it,
ruptured like a dandelion
under sudden breath.
The man who began the baby in her,
soon as he took the youngest part of her, fled.
Hence the small, leather-handled knife
buried in his half-born daughter's head.
The mid-wife said,
She'll die by morning
if we don't remove it.
She'll die now, if we do, said her father.
Has to be done gently, said
the oldest woman in the room, like
separating twins. After dropping statements
on the table
and comparing the length of them,
they decided to let the night
find the morning
where it could.
At dawn, they rose to check on
the baby, the knife, and the
daughter, and saw, like sharp
outlines of a hard, new parable--
the daughter had died, while the baby and knife
had lived.
This is good! Strange. Where did it come from? What happened to the daughter? The only suggestion I would have is to remove the name of the midwife. Not sure it adds anything...but that's just my preference. Now tell me what four words you would remove from mine.
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