"Let Me Put It Badly":

"I will feed them doom cakes...". Whew, what a line.
This one has a convincingly authoritative tone--calm, fatalistic, careful.
It's pretty much seamless... (and here comes the inevitable "but", which I'm sure you saw was coming): I'm not sure about that last line. It doesn't ripple out with finality. I feel like we're still waiting for a last gesture.